Finely some accomplishments

I have made some accomplishments lol finely that fanfic Ive been writing fore
two years is about it be posted but I just started righting it about a few mounts ago
and the first chapter isn't really long but I plan to make a lot more chapters later
and the only reason why its not up now is that im still editing it and might post it on Wednesday.
ALSO please please please tell me what i should improve on or what parts you didn't and what parts you did like
also tell me if some parts are confusing to you and if the are some parts that just don't mack any sens please
give me your full consumerism and don't hold back im a big boy i can tack all that instals.

Thank you and have a good day or night or dream.